If I could turn back time. I Would.

If I could turn back time.

I would. If I could speak to

you one more time face

to face. I would.

And tell you how much

I love you. You died too

suddenly. I could not

watch you suffer no more.

One minute you are fine.
Next, you are gone.

In this world we take each

other for granted each and

every new day.

And only when the worse

happens, Do we realize what

we have lost.

Forever is never the same.
Yes the world keeps on turning
And the next new day appears.

But that smile of your sweet face.
And your friendly hello in the

mornings are gone for good.
And your chatty ways.

Only the heartfelt Echos and the

memories of you are still alive,

fresh inside my heart and soul

remain with you forever more.
I shall never forget you.

Part of your lives on within me.

Unspoken and unheard.

Reviews

[Deep]

heart touching. Indeed we have tendency to take everything granted and know its value when it is gone. You have observed and written it expressively.

[alanwgraham]

Losing someone close can be heartbreaking but it is true that they live on in our hearts. You've written a very honest and direct account of all the ways we hurt and there is no one that will not connect with this.
It's good to focus on the big things in life in our writing.
Thanks for sharing Dee.
Alan

[Onlyme]

This was for my mother in law. She passed recently. And I miss her. And always will. She was a great character and a good person at heart.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Beautiful
I lost mum four years mum in law three dad 25 years and father in law 26

[Onlyme]

I feel for you Julie. And thank you for liking my poem for my mother in law.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

It’s teally beautiful
A lovely memorial to someone

[wordman]

beautiful tribute to a love long ago,they live on forever

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Wow did you write this at the same time as me we must be twins

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Part of your lives on within me.
Unspoken and unheard.

Very emotional & touching lines. Life really seems to be very small at times.