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Engaged in algorithms
Sharing a smile
Having a $1,000,000 car
and walking for a mile

Take me on a sordid plane
& tAlk of daisies slain in vain
handed to a lover to see a smile
and remove a smidgen of life's daily pain

Step back, relax, and walk on by
Enjoy green grass and bright blue sky
tomorrow the days of dust are destined
Bringing a tear to the loved one's eye

Copyright ©2009 Kristopher Darby Barrilleaux

Author's Note

ignore e.e. cummings style ridiculous letters

Reviews

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

I found this to be a well written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah