Smile again

Smile again

A Poem by Primo
"

I'm an amateur sorry

"

 

Have you ever feel the moment

You see someone crying

But all you can do is stand there

And pretend you don't care

 

She was a strong girl

But on that very day

Her eyes were full of tears

I'm sure it was real

 

I know what it feels like

My heart is not a steel

It's okay now my friend

Everything must come to an end

 

I wish I could see you again

With those sparkling smile

Stronger and braver than before

It's the only thing I've been waiting for

 

© 2014 Primo


Author's Note

Primo
ignore grammar problems

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On the second stanza instead of ''was'' its ''were'' other than that
The poem is really good, I really like it
Good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Primo

9 Years Ago

thanks sir :D

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Added on December 21, 2014
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I Wish I Wish

A Poem by Primo