Love...Hate..

I love you

then I hate you

your smile still gets me

but you irritate me

I miss you,

I want to forget you.

   How can this ever be normal,
      can I ever love again?
           All I know is

I do love you,

and I hate you because I do.

Author's Note

So this was just me going back and forth, you see there's this guy...and he's making me want to forget Andrew, but I can't. I love him, and I hate him from it.

Reviews

[ATG]

These are one of the worst types of exes. The ones you hate so much, but can't help but love. I remember an ex that made me do that too. I love her and hate her just as much. It sucks. As for the poem, it was very well written. I enjoyed the red and blue fonts. It added a nice touch. My only suggestion for change is have the stanza in black font be set more in the middle to represent a neutral thought. Other than that, it was perfect.

[Captain]

I love the creativity in your formatting. It represents your inner conflict beautifully. Perhaps you could even incorperate this peice, or at least the concept into a book of some kind. Sort, but very powerful. I like it a lot.
'Captain

[Reaper]

I love the different colors and spacing, adds just enough to the poem. strong poem

[hopelessromantic]

i love poems like this they make u think

[Hiddenfire]

have to say the structure is tantalizing in that it sets up the words to be read just right. Afraid I can't be much help as far as the premise though, I've never had to deal with a bad ex in that way, but maybe that's just time apart talking and not the actuality of it. Anyway, I thought it was excellent.

[Katarzyna Slade]

Love the way the layout shows how you flutter back and forth. good job :) x

Wow! I love the power within your words! Nice write!

[Danielle Olivia]

LOL i do not mean to laugh but this is so eerily similar to a situation i was in with a guy named andrew as well... wow coincidence
but that aside the simplicity of the piece is well done but i think that there could be some added elements to make it a stronger piece maybe consider some word changes ... but i do like the structure of the piece

[Eleanor]

Wow. Great job
-Eleanor

[Sunflower]

it's like you know how i feel girl, this is really good. I love it.

[Jordan's Back]

Another Heartfelt write