Cowboy Hat and A Southern Twang

Cause' every time I see you
I get a little dizzy
I want to be your baby,
to be that girl that
blows your mind.

I want to see you rock
that cowboy hat
and your
southern Twang.

You don't have to hide
from me, you can be who you are
your all I want
you know it.

Reviews

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This is wonderful, I enjoyed this write

[Hiddenfire]

Well the feel of this poem carries over and I agree with the last reviewer in that it has a very catchy and almost sing-song vibe to it. One of your best in my opinion.

[A.Pinto]

This poem has a really sing-song feel. It's really playful and enjoyable to read. I get a really good impression of what you want and how you feel after reading this. Very cute!

[Jordan's Back]

Sweet, and playful.
Wonderful write

[Asb]

short yet full of love !!
really nice :)

[P.VIJAY KUMAR]

"You don't have to hide
from me, you can be who you are"
An open and straight poem, readable and impressive, picturing unconditional attachment. A good one,Paige

[Sunflower]

this is really good, and when i read it i felt the words as they played through my mind from reading it. i also can relate to this a lot too. good job with your work (:

I love how smooth the words rolled off the lines. Nice job! I also really liked you comparing yourself and him to a cowboy and his southern twang. I loved this one!

[ATG]

Short,simple, and very good.

[Distant horizons]

Nice flow to this. Welcome to the cafe :)