Charmed by You

Why did you choose to charm her if your intentions were to harm her?
Loving you made her blind to the signs.
And your heartless crimes.

Burning steady and sturdy bridges.
Stabbing her heart,leaving deep incisions.
Now her canvas is covered in scars.

She ignored everyone's heartfelt desperate warnings.
As a result you left her mind ,body and soul storming.

Charmed , Charmed by you.
Everlastingly marked.
You were her muse.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Dear Laconic. I liked how you made the words dance to meaningful ending.
"Charmed , Charmed by you.
Everlastingly marked.
You were her muse"
I liked the above lines and we do need our muses. Keep us hoping and dreaming. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Laconic Meraki]

Thank you... And without hope we have nothing. In my opinion.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and you are welcome my friend.

[Chris Shaw]

It is difficult to ignore charm. It can be infectious and it can draw you in. This reads like betrayal to me. The warnings weren't heeded and the price is being paid. A sad tale, conveyed well.

Chris

[Laconic Meraki]

Yes.
Yes indeed.
Thanks , Chris.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A dark tale of betrayal in love told in a flowing verse with spirit and some playful rhymes. The opening line is a good draw to the reader and the final line closed the door with a slap!

[Laconic Meraki]

Yes.
She had hopes and dreams.
She was unaware what she was getting herself into.read moreYes.
She had hopes and dreams.
She was unaware what she was getting herself into.

[Laconic Meraki]

He tried to bury her.

But WHY?
He was her muse.
Maybe he knew that when he met her.
Maybe he used her undying love against her.

Thanks for the review .☺