The Hardest Part

For her, saying goodbye to him was the hardest part.
Collecting every single piece of her now shattered heart.
The world she knew crashes around her, like waves upon the rocks.
Her "forever" now simply memories she put up in a box.
She cursed cupid for he shot where he aimed.
Even though they said their goodbyes, scars will forever remain.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is an exquisite expression of how hard it can be to close the connection with some people we have loved (((HUGS)))

[Laconic Meraki]

Yes... Family too.

[Laconic Meraki]

Now that I look at this writing in a new perspective!!

[Mr. D]

Don't want scars, don't promise your heart to another. In doing so, you give them a knife to stab you with.

If you open your heart to someone, you're asking to get it back bruised, broken, and beaten. Not worth it to me.

[Laconic Meraki]

It was worth it to me. Because the pain made me stronger. It taught me a lot

[Mr. D]

Was it worth it? From what you've said, and what I've read, it sure doesn't seem that way. But whatever, I guess. Opening your heart to people is never worth it. Not to me. If you're a glutton for punishment, go right ahead, though. But just know, you can't trust anyone out there.

[Laconic Meraki]

I don't trust anyone.
But I also speak my mind.
I'm 24. I'm finding myself. Who I'm supposed to be. Writing is my passion. It's the way I handle my phases, my happiness and my pain. But keep in mind, all of the words I've written aren't necessarily ABOUT ME 😉💋

[Mr. D]

*shrug* It's cool. Finding yourself is all well and good, but don't find problems for yourself in the meantime, that's all. Anyway, I've said enough. Good night.

[Laconic Meraki]

Sweet Dreams, darling.

[Mr. D]

Heh...if you say so.

[Laconic Meraki]

I do say so.

[Mr. D]

Ok, then. I guess that's that.

[Laconic Meraki]

Ditto Mr. D