24

She finally sees the world as it really is and becomes awoken spiritually and sees she is in fact not hopeless but important.

Finally she opened her eyes to the world. With that, she suddenly realized her worth. No longer feeling like a broken hopeless little girl. While finding herself, and her purpose all of her pain surfaced.

It was time to love who she was and to, for once, put HER peace first.
The answers she had been seeking lie within her heart. Words roll from her soul to a sheet of white paper creating "ART. "

Reviews

[JR]

Love the connection between the speaker finding herself and finding her art. There is such a tight relationship between the self and true art, and you did a good job highlighting this. The prose-style also really works... makes it more confessional. There are things we can say about ourselves writing in second or third person that we can't say in the first. I'm in the same place in my life... finally putting my own peace first. You gave words to that, thanks.

[Laconic Meraki]

Thank you 😁

[barleygirl]

I love that you acknowledge that "finding oneself" is not an ongoing picnic . . . it's hard work & it can involved some pain while digging! (((HUGS)))

[Betty Hermelee]

Finding yourself is paramount to being able to communicate whether it be with others or the ability to find oneself I creativity such as poetry; lovely write!

[Ballpark Frank]

I get this. I try that too. Most of us here are hurting, we are thoughtful, and we need a release. And writing can be our set form.

[Einstein Noodle]

wow! profound ... i'm loving her closing roll from her soul ... what a huge story implied .. 24 is her age i take it ;) i really like this ... its very prose poetic
E.

[Laconic Meraki]

Thank you. 😍
And yes...
"she" is 24 😁😁

[Einstein Noodle]

so thankful for writing eh!? ;)

[Laconic Meraki]

What do you mean?

[Einstein Noodle]

as an outlet for expression ... so thankful we have it ;))))))))))) we can get all kinds of things out in so many ways that are positive in creative writing

[Laconic Meraki]

Yes, that is for sure. I will never stop writing.

[Paul Bell]

Sometimes time is all you have to figure it all out.
But when the stars shine down then life can begin again.

[Laconic Meraki]

I am a Scorpio. If that tells ya anything.

[Laconic Meraki]

Even in the darkest of nights, the stars still shine.

[Paul Bell]

New decade, time is on the move.