Kiss me Goodnight

One kiss and my heart is in flight.
I'm the damsel and you are my knight.
I'd run to you at any speed -climb any mountain to see you smile;
No matter the heights or the miles.
In your dark times, I'll be your light.
This love is similar to a fairytale.
My soul with you SAILS.
We are untameable- a flower that grows wild.
A rose with thorns yet so devine.
We are heaven and hell combined.

Always kiss me Goodnight my handsome knight..

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmm like first love's innocence ... with a touch of reality "We are heaven and hell combined."
closing line contains a whole lot of wisdom ... i read in the Bible the advice in Ephesians 4:26 "Do not let the sun go down on our anger?" ... a fine path to follow especially in a committed relationship says i! nice poem ma'am!
E.

[Laconic Meraki]

Never go to sleep mad.....

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ....................

[Maxwell Ryder]

I go to sleep mad all the time :(

[Laconic Meraki]

Don't do it.. Breath and Let it go

[Maxwell Ryder]

Can’t.Too stubborn. Makes the love spicier to keep it a week.

[Laconic Meraki]

I can't relate...

[Chris]

Our mind has a way of finding that our heart notices an other... and sometimes they even notice us as well. But again, sometimes, that other never does notice ...us.

[Neville]

... Well if that aint love, I dont know what is .... I imagine there is a very lucky fella out there somewhere ..

... Neville :)

[Laconic Meraki]

If only.
If only he would have felt that way.
If only he would have appreciated me.

[Neville]

... the world is full of what if's .. more deadly than plastics and lots of other deadly things besides :)

[Laconic Meraki]

Ya reckon?

[Sami Khalil]

Softly spoken, energetically written. A fairy-tale love comes alive and fills the space. Very enjoyable write. Pen on...

[Sami Khalil]

"In your dark times, I'll be your light.
This love is similar to a fairytale.
My soul with you SAILS."

[Laconic Meraki]

Did you like that part ?
Or dislike?

[Sami Khalil]

I did. That is why I quoted...

[Laconic Meraki]

Ok , Just wasn't sure your views or opinion on it. Im open to any critism.☺
Thank you though.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. Thank you for the friend request

[Dripping Chocolate Madn..]

Someone sounds smitten! :)
Hopefully he doesn't run at the first sign of a real dragon.
Although...
Even fools in foil armor may still bear the best of intentions.
And even Don Quixote had his Dulcinea.

Lovely poem. Hopelessly romantic. I approve wholeheartedly.
Just avoid windmills, you'll be fine.

[Laconic Meraki]

Oh. He was nowhere near a "knight".
Night.. Like dark maybe.
Left me right there. read moreOh. He was nowhere near a "knight".
Night.. Like dark maybe.
Left me right there.

Maybe he was in somewhat my knight.
Because of him , I learned to fight that dark. And see the light.

He thought ashes would be my remains.
I think.
But I rose from the flames he threw me in
I'm ike a phenoix
I go through phases- he absentmindlely forgot.
Recreated my mindset.
Passion never fades away.
The sun will rise tomorrow.
I will try again- a new day.

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Good :) standing back up, taller than you were when you fell, is cathartic and healing.
I find most knights' mistakes are failing to recognize the maiden was always more dangerous than the dragon, the whole time.
Or WAS the dragon, in some cases.

But... Like a wiser person than I said...
At least he wore a mask!
And now he's practicing social distancing!
See? He IS considerate.

[Laconic Meraki]

See, together we fought his demons.
I completely put him first.
Forgetting that I had my own.
My love was limitless and self-less.
For a very long time.

I question if he chose me ,putting me under a "spell".
Maybe he was only infactuated with the thought of love.
I was weak and naive but because of him. I am strong.
I will not project my pain onto the next.
Though my mindset has changed.
My heart remains the same.

[Papaya]

Love is an adventure and it seems these two are living it.
Very romantic!

[Laconic Meraki]

Turns out she was blinded.
He was just an idiot with a mask made of tin foil lol.

[Papaya]

Well, at least he's wearing a mask. :)

[Olivia Danielle]

I loved this poem Christa, very cleverly written. Well done!

[Laconic Meraki]

Thank you for reading. ☺

[Ladysue]

love the title. It says it all. No matter what happens during the day, good times, bad times, love shines and the bond doesn’t break. The kiss goodnight says it all. Beautifully expressed.

[Laconic Meraki]

Yes. An unbreakable bond. A tie that binds.

[Ladysue]

That’s the best kind..:)

[Laconic Meraki]

Thanks for the review. And kind words.🤞

[Ladysue]

Your welcome.. 🙂

[Relic]

I enjoyed reading this very much. Your rhymes are spot on, your emotional tone glides along consistently from line to line, and you have good spelling and grammar which is tops with me.

Nicely done, Christa. :-)

[♛ Monet Madden &#..]

This is great poetry. Runs deep and smooth. though has its irony.

Very good.

[Laconic Meraki]

Thank you for the feedback !🙏

[Laconic Meraki]

Thank you for the feedback !🙏