There are nights you feel as if no one will ever love you, your bones are too fragile to be kissed to sleep and you only find tears in the bed next to you. These nights find words written across your eyelids in pen, prose of self loathing breaking up into radio silence cracking numbness and misunderstanding of breath. You look to the stars but they have been dead for longer than you have lived, unloved and straining under weight you never asked to carry, broken with scars too permanent to bury behind car wrecks in your mind and feverish dreams. You feel hopeless in yourself, because no one will ever want to be around when you are broken and crying yourself to sleep on nights like this
Sadness and loneliness always find you in the shadows of the night. Beautifully conveyed in this wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
It is so interesting and odd to me how the night can bring out so many emotions in us. All we can do.. read moreIt is so interesting and odd to me how the night can bring out so many emotions in us. All we can do is wait until morning, when the sun relieves our fears and loneliness. Thank you for your comment, it means a lot!
Daytime distractions blur aloneness, but as we lay down to rest - the ceiling reminds of our oneness! Your write poignantly explores the frustrations and fear of loneliness. But we know not what the future bring,s so patience is the name of the game - and - you also have friends on WC to rely upon for comfort - :-)
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Night is always the hardest time for me, and as I have found out, for others as well. I am glad that.. read moreNight is always the hardest time for me, and as I have found out, for others as well. I am glad that so many people found meaning in this poem. I have found many people that I relate with on this website, and for that I am grateful. Thank you for this comment!
A sad journey in your words. Sometime we feel we cannot not win. Maybe the morning light can give us hope. Thank you Ally Ann for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
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Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Why thank you, your words mean a lot. I often find myself living by the words, "the sun will rise, a.. read moreWhy thank you, your words mean a lot. I often find myself living by the words, "the sun will rise, and we will try again". This quote comforts me and gives me hope through the nights that seem never ending.
Being lonely at night is hard to put into words but you did so very elegantly. I think almost everyone can relate to this poem at some point of their life.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thank you! Sometimes it is truly unimaginable that you will make it through to morning, but here we .. read moreThank you! Sometimes it is truly unimaginable that you will make it through to morning, but here we are.
Alone nights must be scary as I felt it after reading this...dead stars, breaking radio silence, across you eyelids in pen.....these words were great to go through...
The one who feels lone at nights will feel bit soothe if reads your poem....well penned and expressed...nice read☺!
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thank you! I tried my best to capture these feelings and put them into words.
Lately I have been feeling very lost, and it is comforting to come here and rediscover pieces of who I was and who I still must be
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