1st Impressions

1st Impressions

A Poem by Iz

Tonight I got to talk to you for the first time
The first time I got to hear your voice like honey
And first impressions for you were only amazing
Such a sweet guy is what I feel you are
I don't know what else to say about you
We haven't talked that much
And you said that you were quieter than usual around me
And that I make you nervous
I don't know how to take that
I mean I shouldn't make you nervous
In truth you too made me quite nervous
and I don't know why
Maybe because I really am shy
I was actually shaking when I got off of the phone with you
You are pretty easy to talk to
It matters not if our conversation is serious or not
I could listen to you talk for hours
You have no clue how much I am anticipating your letter

© 2008 Iz


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I thought this was something we all could relate to, even though it reads more like an observation than a poem. Your title is 1st Expressions, yet in your third line you wrote Impressions.... I vote for Impressions! ;-)

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Added on December 6, 2008
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Iz
Iz

Terlingua, TX



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