Blue Hinting Yellow

A poem for a past boyfriend and for a character in a story of mine from his lover.

Blue Hinting Yellow

Lulu Forshage

 

Blue hinting yellow;

Water hiding Gold.

These are your lovely eyes.

 

From the sky above,

To the lemons in tea;

These are your lovely eyes.

 

The beautiful Neptune,

And the breath-taking sunflowers;

These are your lovely eyes.

 

Blue hinting yellow;

Water hiding Gold.

These are your eyes.

 

...Your Lovely Eyes...

Reviews

[Rima]

I like it! I didn't see any spelling errors or capitalization errors. It flows nicely and I think it is sorta sweet. Great job2