The Pretzel and Pea

The Pretzel and Pea

A Poem by onion demon
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The story of a pretzel and a pea...duh

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There once was a pretzel that was caring and bright
He wanted some friends, but there was no one in sight
The pretzel looked all day and all night,
But then he got thirsty and purchased a Sprite

One day he was wandering out and about,
And he saw the best thing ever, no doubt,
It wasn't a bird or a plane or a drought,
It was a a beautiful pea who had crossed his route.

The pea said "Hello! you're looking quite swell!"
The pretzel was so excited he fell.
"That's it! There she is! I'll book a hotel!"
He said, as he was mezmerized by her beautiful smell.

The goal was to find a nice little friend,
But instead they had hormones that started to blend
So Pretzel and Pea followed some kind of trend,
Pretzal got to have sex with Pea's rear end. 

© 2015 onion demon


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hahaha hilarious. A fun write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Such a silly little poem! The ending did catch me by surprise, and while I think it was completely inappropriate, I can see you have a bright writing future ahead of you. Keep your head up kid!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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A Story by onion demon