Listen

Listen

A Poem by Chase

Sometimes the world is
such quiet place-
with an undertoning hum as
the overtone of life.

Even silence is a sound.
don't forget to listen.

© 2016 Chase


Author's Note

Chase
What do you think of the second stanza? Is it neceassary? Does it fit well with the first?

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I think you should leave the second stanza, it creates a nice ending to it. "even silence is a sound" is one of the best lines. Should the second line be "such a quiet place" instead of "such quiet place?" ......i like the "undertoning hum" part of the poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Chase
Chase

Stillwater, MN



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My name is Chase. I love writing and find solace through it. Feel free to sift through my myriad of words and tell me what you think:) Constructive criticism is welcome! more..

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