*CRACK*

*CRACK*

A Poem by Chase

It flies forth, an extension of myself
and strikes the air   as it were to make a rift
in the loop of time:

If only    to strike again.

© 2016 Chase


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"loop of time" and "extension of myself" were my favorite lines/words from this poem. I don't have much to say about this, as it is always excellently written. You could almost expand on this in some way in a story or something.

Posted 8 Years Ago


strike the air
make rifts
all in the loop of time
the dreamer strikes again

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Chase
Chase

Stillwater, MN



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My name is Chase. I love writing and find solace through it. Feel free to sift through my myriad of words and tell me what you think:) Constructive criticism is welcome! more..

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