Beaded Beauty

Beaded Beauty

A Poem by Chase

The day is young with dew that drips.
Dew that plips and
dew that slips.
Dew that plops
as rainfall does, from
way up in the canopy tops.
Dew that glistens on the blade of
every green in   every glade.
Dew that makes the morning land
shine anew, as silky grand,
for morning dew has touched our earth
and with it comes   a new day's birth.

© 2015 Chase


Author's Note

Chase
This piece was very impromptu but I actually had to work a fair amount to get its cadence to flow well with specific rhyming schemes. I'm very fond of it... let me know what you think!

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This is quite beautiful, and your rhythm in words makes them fall very well. You are right to be fond of it. There seems to be a pattern with your poetry. I think I understand why you put double spaces between some words, for emphasis. But I think it might be easier on the eyes if you simply moved it down a line, or used more commas. But, it is just my humble opinion.

Your words are your own, and they are beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase

9 Years Ago

Your review made me smile and feel good about my work, so I thank you for that. This is one of my mo.. read more
Anna

9 Years Ago

I see. Every writer has their style. I look forward to more of your poetry. I am seldom impressed, b.. read more



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This is quite beautiful, and your rhythm in words makes them fall very well. You are right to be fond of it. There seems to be a pattern with your poetry. I think I understand why you put double spaces between some words, for emphasis. But I think it might be easier on the eyes if you simply moved it down a line, or used more commas. But, it is just my humble opinion.

Your words are your own, and they are beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase

9 Years Ago

Your review made me smile and feel good about my work, so I thank you for that. This is one of my mo.. read more
Anna

9 Years Ago

I see. Every writer has their style. I look forward to more of your poetry. I am seldom impressed, b.. read more
Great poem!
Well done!
Keep on writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I dig the sing song quality of this piece. It hits all the right notes. It sounds great aloud; the words play well against each other.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much :) I have a few other poems with that cadence. If you liked it then I would reco.. read more
Elizabeth

9 Years Ago

Yes, I can see the influence :)

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Chase
Chase

Stillwater, MN



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My name is Chase. I love writing and find solace through it. Feel free to sift through my myriad of words and tell me what you think:) Constructive criticism is welcome! more..

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