Raw

Tightening of the chest.
Energy, to be expended;
of a singular focus.
Wants, needs, desires.
The hitch of breath before
the plunge.
And then...
It's just happening.

Author's Note

What do you think this is about? I want to make sure I get the right feeling across. Thanks!

Reviews

[marcus]

diving? but into what. I admit I find it somewhat ambiguous. But I like it

[Chase]

It's actually about sex so I'll have to see if anyone else gets it! Ambiguity is part of it, I want it to be subtle!