Dogged

ck ck FWOOSH
"What is this?
What am I?"
Thought the little flame
A draft floated by
Flicker, flame, flicker
Threatened
"Who is this adversary?
Hmm.. for you, my friend
I have heart."
The flame drew breath
Puffed out his chest
Avoided death
Surpassed the test
Smiling, profoundly proud
"I win."
He exclaims out loud
Existing

Author's Note

Just a cute little poem about a stubborn candlestick c:

Reviews

[Azriel]

another great piece, really liked the structure and form used here, as well as the language. i look forward to reading more of your work, great job.

[Chase]

Thank you again:] I'm glad that I'm able to create things others like