Loyalty

Unnerving

SNAP! POP!
Breaking bones
From his lips
Escape the moans
Mangled flesh
Blood drained toes
Swinging mood
Highs to lows
Yet by his side
She stays

Reviews

[Natasha]

This poem definitely reminds me of some of my older writings that had more gore, I guess you could say. I loved the "blood drained toes" line.

[Chase]

This is a very very old poem of mine. I wrote it about 4 or 5 years ago and since have revised it with a few tweeks. I still enjoy it though. And im glad you did as well. Thats one of my favorite lines.