love just a love

love just a love

A Poem by one of you

Remembering the day I saw you first time 
may be its a memory for you
but for me its a momentous milestone
baby I don't want you to love me back
but I just love you
 
don't ask me why I love you
I don't have a answer
its like a eternity long time ago 
baby I don't want your enmity
but I just love you


Just live in our past days pleasant days
its crazy days that we do it for us
baby I just want to hear ur voice and 
don't wanna talk back
but I just love you

baby hate me as much as you want 
but I don't wanna to leave you
feeling like standing in fire
love to play with this fire 
don't wanna lose you to others, you are mine
baby I just love you

© 2018 one of you


Author's Note

one of you
this is ma first writing . say me the mistakes and ignore my grammar problems

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Such a cute poem, its structured well. I like the pattern. Good start :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


one of you

6 Years Ago

thanks prynka
This is such a cute and relatable poem, and I love the repetitiveness of it. Great Job!
-Anastasia

Posted 6 Years Ago


one of you

6 Years Ago

thanks anastasia
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It's so cute and loveable poem!
The specific line "baby I just love you" and it's use at every stanza is beautiful...
Loved reading it!!😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

one of you

6 Years Ago

thanks a lot Ms.tahsin
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6 Years Ago

You're heartedly welcome😊

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Added on May 21, 2018
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one of you

chennai, India



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fails until I win. lonely girl with some psych thrills more..

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A Poem by one of you