Sweet Release

All that should weigh heavy on my shoulders

Aches between my thighs. 

Please don't tease. 

 Tortured for play,

Accompanied by such shame,

Lies an intense

"Come, O' My"

 

Take such pleasure.

In my man-made

Orgasmic Sea.

 

Deep within,

my sweet, sweet

Release. 

Author's Note

Undesired Frustration

Reviews

[Anonymous -]

Dam ! I'm becoming a huge fan of your writing ! as always , very well done. you paint a vivid picture through words

[Ralph Rosell]

"All that should weigh heavy on my shoulders
Aches between my thighs."

Awesome lines!! Just awesome..!!

[Cody]

I love the word play in this. It's beautiful mutilation.

[TheOne&Only]

Well, thank you for taking the time to read it!! :) I appreciate the review!

[...Relic...]

~ A Salacious poem that swims within the depths of an erotic sea. Nicely done. ~

[TheOne&Only]

Thank you for taking a time to read. I appreciate your review!!

[...Relic...]

My pleasure. ;)

[Saddam]

Take such pleasure.
In my man-made
Orgasmic Sea.

Its beautiful erotic.
I love this one.

[TheOne&Only]

Thank you so much!!!

[Eagle Cruagh]

Sorry !
Did not mean to
Build on the sweet
Yes... yes...NOW !
---- Eagle Cragh

[TheOne&Only]

What kind of poem would this be, if one did not build on its sweetness!! Apology unnecessary! Thank you for your review.

[Eagle Cruagh]

I am just teaing----The poem could not be better, or
more exciting. Thanks.
----- Eagle

[TheOne&Only]

Haha I know. Thank you again.

[AaronFreitas]

Somehow I missed this write but damn it's a sexy erotic one :) Loved it... almost bought a ticket to Brazil when I was done reading it! haha :)

[TheOne&Only]

Haha, I am flattered by your review! I am glad you found it to be exciting ;)