Daring Dessert

Daring Dessert

A Poem by TheOne&Only

A Succulent Desire
Filled with wildness fire. 
Tame it down, with devotion 
Devour my peddle like flower. 

Don't be hasty, 
Like fine wine, Time
decides such taste 
as mine. 

© 2015 TheOne&Only


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Full with sensuality and creating some image in mind.
Love this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


damn that was sexy.
How sensual and soft, yet seductive and suggestive.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Short and sensuous.
Delightful perspective.
Love the image created.
Thank you,
----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 9 Years Ago


TheOne&Only

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Your very welcome.
good wordplay with this
a great build up leading into a really good finish



Posted 9 Years Ago


TheOne&Only

9 Years Ago

Thank you!! Im glad you thought so
closed

9 Years Ago

youre welcome
I enjoyed how the words perfectly rubbed off each other. One of your best works hon. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


TheOne&Only

9 Years Ago

Aww thank you Sin!! Thanks for reading, I always appreciate your reviews!
A very sexy write my friend :) Awesome work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


TheOne&Only

9 Years Ago

Sexy is my thing ;) haha thanks for reading!
AaronFreitas

9 Years Ago

haha I will keep that in mind my friend ;)
Sensual and sweet words that ignite the flames of endless wildfires. xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


TheOne&Only

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you thought so.

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Added on July 29, 2015
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TheOne&Only
TheOne&Only

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