Mad Woman

In the center of a room.

 Surrounded with the thoughts in my head.

The annoying feeling Of;

hatred, mistrust, doubts, loneliness 

Heartache and pain

 Filled with the unknown

 And fired by my "will" 

Enraged by my beliefs.

The room spins.

Enthralled by the rapidness of my manic stage.

 I scream and belt at the top of my lungs.

 Empowered at this point.

 Pupils Brown goes to black.

 Everything that was in this room that centered me in the midst Was in my harsh grips..

 Watch these pieces shatter

 as my mind breaks with them.

 Thrashing with cries to even the deafest of ears

One object to another.

My site goes. I'm blind by the water that falls as each item crashes to each wall of this four enclosed room.. 

Hear my cries. 

Derivative words spill the echoes silent night.

 Finally dropped to the pain under my knees.

 Holding nothing back.

 A roar of a monster releases into the silence. 

Thrown back by the power of the roar,

 I tell once more... 

Shot forward to my hands and knees..

I lay by the differences all this unmade. 

I shout no more.

A mad woman lived here once before.

 She lays on her foyer.

 To the broken objects.

 She no longer inhales the pain or feels the need to unleash the beast.

That killed her dreams. 

Rather he rots in the arms of another woman.

 He will call his wife.

 My true love. . he is not.

Reviews

[micky]

This is so raw and powerful I am in love with this piece....its amazing keep it up:)

[TheOne&Only]

thank you :)

[sinNsincerity]

Wow, you really turned it up another level.
I like that! ;)

[AaronFreitas]

"I shout no more
A mad woman lived here once before.
She lays on her foyer
To the broken objects to the floor un seen.
She no longer inhales the pain or feels the need to unleash the beast
That killed her dreams. "

Loved those lines... lot of passion... deep meaning behind those words. Good work!

[613]

Outrage is one word: "Pupils dialted by out rage"

This is a fantastically written poem.

My favorite lines are:
"She no longer inhales the pain or feels the need to unleash the beast
That killed her dreams.
Rather he rots in the arms of another woman
He will call his wife.
My true love. .
he is not."

Amazing job!

- Brittney

[TheOne&Only]

Thank you so much for the correction. And taking the time to read. I'm Douglas you enjoyed this write.

[TheOne&Only]

Not Douglas, I mean I am glad. sorry lol

[613]

Haha. That's okay! (Autocorrect baffles me sometimes). & you're welcome.