Our Coming Day

In the beginning of our parting

Night became the worst... 

 The pain was engorging... 

As time has it..

 No , the pain still apparent..

 The nights however

Became my favorite... 

To feel the pain when the sun falls down...

 Allows the memories to come clear and bright, say the dark still night...

I can dream with my eyes wide open 

 Live with my eyes closed shut.

The pain that comes when the sun goes down..

 Is a pain I no longer keep at bay..

On cont-rare

I look forward now 

 For every night. 

Till our coming day.

Reviews

[sinNsincerity]

This is really good.
This sucked me in and kept me iintrigued.

[TheOne&Only]

Your review is HIGHLY appreciated, especially because I may be a fan of yours in particular..Thank you for your time and reviews...

[sinNsincerity]

Well thank you, I'm a fan of yours also.

[AaronFreitas]

"I can dream with my eyes wide open
Live with my eyes closed shut."

I love those lines, they are so true in so many ways. Many times my dreams become intertwined with my reality :) Good work I enjoyed this piece.

[TheOne&Only]

My most favored LINE ive said yet!! Im glad you agree...Thank you again.