remember me?

I'm so beyond words you look at me with eyes that can't define what you've processed. I'm that feeling you get when you stare into space & wander because I'm a dream that woke up & since I was born there but raised here I can explain everything you hoped that some day, just maybe, some body will one day understand because those things just don't make sense here but.. Bring you back home. I'm the bridge between crazy and normal and bring things over at the same time. I'm you, living in me trying to wake you up again so we can say wassup to the others. Namasté.

Author's Note

I have punctuation issues. If you can help me feel free. Before that let me know what you think here.

Reviews

[Niall Madden]

I enjoyed the conflict within the poem itself the fragmented structure emphasized the whole argument. personally I would have liked to see you expand further on the poem take it to further depths, for example why is he so incomprehensible or why does he bend the body's reality and drive him crazy. good poem id like to see more :)

[omnizzl]

Thank you for this!! That was only the beginning. I know exactly where to take this now.

[Relic]

This is a little hard to define. I imagine it is about the subconscious mind. That voice that talks in between normalcy and insanity. Yes, there are issues here with punctuation but also run-on sentences.

[omnizzl]

That's exactly what it is. I want to somehow give life to that divider.