Just love me

Just wants to be loved...

Can't you just love me the way he never has?
The way I want him to
Asked him too
Please
Will you catch me?
I'm no longer breathing
He keeps taking it away
But why is he still causing me
Pain
Loneliness
Frustration
Anger
Can't you just hold me tight?
I'm tired of wishing for a chance
Maybe I'll be his someday
Please
Just love me... The way he never will

Author's Note

I really do appreciate your review friends :) Thank you!

Reviews

[Luna Zerimar]

Oh my.

I felt all the feelings you listed below in your writing. Which, from my opinion, a lot of people struggle to do.

I mean, or course, you can always feel what they're feeling when they're writing their piece.

But, yours has an intensity to it.

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much for kind review. It’s truly appreciated.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the flow of thoughts leading to hopeful ending.
"Just love me... The way he never will"
I like the want of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[A. Amos]

Each word perfectly describes the romance... I admire your skills. You portrait love and betrayal in deep and beautiful manner. Good job

[Sami Khalil]

"Pain
Loneliness
Frustration
Anger
Can't you just hold me tight?
I'm tired of wishing for a chance"

Sincere and straightforward wishes of the heart. May they come true. A lovely write...:)................