I wonder

I wonder

If they ever found out

The feeling that makes me feel

I don't know

Amazing

Will they take out their weapons?

Mmm that feeling though
Mind floating

Up and above

Blood unraveling

Muscles

No longer gripping

I wonder

Do they know?

This feeling that I love

It's beautiful

Smiling like a teenager
In love

Never want it to end

But I still wonder

Do you know this feeling?

Author's Note

I appreciate your reviews:)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The feeling of love. A emotional high rarely reached.
"But I still wonder
Do you know this feeling?"
Love come rarely and I tell people. Enjoy the place and make it last. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[A. Amos]

What I like about your writing...you always share life in your words full of feelings and emotions. Marvelous!

[Sami Khalil]

"This feeling that I love
It's beautiful
Smiling like a teenager
In love
Never want it to end
But I still wonder"

I like to wonder and have feelings of wonder. Keep them guessing...An excellent poem...:)...........

[Michelle Coleman]

I read through this poem twice. The first time I wondered if the voice belonged to a woman in a hostile environment where the show of pleasant feelings are not encouraged. Are maybe even frowned upon. Seen with suspicion. Punished. Because you mentioned weapons.

The second time around I thought of energy vampires along with drama kings and queens. People who hate the sight of happiness in others, doing their best to bring them down a notch.

This is a light and whimsical piece, though it could be a bit more insightful for your readers to better connect. For example. What had your blood tied up and muscles tense? How did this change for you?

The way you wrote this piece makes it an easy flow read.