A Story of a Girl

A Story of a Girl

A Poem by Mary Ochoa
"

Not too high Darling :)

"

I know a girl

Not sure if you met her

Let me refresh your memory

She was that girl who was on that pedestal

Dared not to be touched by any other

Fire

Ice

Water

Had nothing against her

Every man wanted her

A touch and taste all over her milky skin

Fake could never bare her soul

Smile

Hair

Voice

All in a perfect pitch

Those who walked by

All slithered with jealousy

In a flick it was hers

Those who looked up to her

Knew what they were doing

They created her

Bulletproof

Chains

Spines

Placed on each of her bones

Until she felt nothing but like a goddess

Remaining high is where she stayed

I feared for her

She needed to be free

Run wild

Laugh till she cried

Feel connection

It took days, months, and years

But where is she now?

Sitting next me

Feeling

Listening

Carrying nothing but her heart 

 

© 2014 Mary Ochoa


Author's Note

Mary Ochoa
Thank you for you reviewers friends!:)

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Good one again from you. Except nothing less.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

9 Years Ago

Thank you friend! :)
Amazing job hun.

"Fake could never bare her soul."

Tough gal. x

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jessica! I appreciate your review:)
I enjoyed the poem. The gentle tone of the words and story left the reader with a nice feeling and vision. I liked the way you described the girl. Gave her strength and beauty. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading! :) Spreading strength and beauty!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
You know I adore your writing as you always write something new and fresh, was totally lost in your poetic story!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Amos! :)
A wonderful write about yourself or a friend perhaps. Excellent...:)...............

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

9 Years Ago

Thank you Sami:)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).....

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