He won't leave until you fall

He won't leave until you fall

A Poem by Mary Ochoa
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This write shares a bit about what Fast Food makes me go through.

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He keeps following me

At my every whim

I keep running

No contact

Looking forward

Moving as fast as I can

He keeps following me

Planted at every corner

Every block

Smiling at me

I drive faster

Running, Walking

Letting the sweat take all of me

He haunts me

Because he wants me to fall 

Fall for another taste

© 2014 Mary Ochoa


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Mary Ochoa
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Good Job though!! I'm sorry for not putting that in my review.

Posted 10 Years Ago


WOw!! it can explain 2 was, one is humorous and the other is terrifying. The humorous one could be the food eating and the other could be your monster or the thing you are afraid of.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your review friend! :) I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
Food is a demon for most! Nice writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Wow.

You and me both girl.

You and me both...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

haha I'm glad. Thank you friend for reading! :)
I like this, serves my interpretation right. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

I'm glad! Thank you friend! :)
Oh God its the biggest problem for I guess 75% of people around the world are chase by the same monster!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

I agree! :) Thank you Amos for reading!
fast food is unveiling in a lot of health problems especially obesity. It is indeed on every corner and that entices people more and more. A lot of people are finding healthy alternatives. Excellent...:)....

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

Exactly! Thank you Sami for reading! :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).........
A very good poem for food. Food is the first love of many. I tell people. Passion will fade and a good cook become more sexy with time. I like the reasons for the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote! :)
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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