So Hollow

Across from me

I see familiar faces

So hollow 

Listen up, hear that

Laughter and laughter 

It's Beautiful

 For every release

Feeling our blood flow

It carried our sins

Separating us from 

Reality

Keeping that routine

Going and going 

Passing down that potion

Thirsty for that dry liquor

Oh Darling, what's wrong

It’s how we pass time 

Through the dark night

Forgetting that time and paper

Funny how time changed

Am I a bad girl now?

Author's Note

Just something I put togther:) Thank you!

Reviews

[Luna Zerimar]

Deep.

I got you. I've got you..

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you for reading friend:)

[RAOrourke]

For every release
Feeling our blood flow
It carried our sins
Separating us from
Reality...loved these lines...your poem rings so true. Your descriptions are wonderful!

[Mary Ochoa]

I am very pleased that you had a great read. Thank you friend:)

[Sami Khalil]

Hollowness shows even if people disguise it. An excellent write...:)..................

[Mary Ochoa]

Yes I agree:) Thank you friend!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I like your style and cryptic way of expressing yourself, leaves your work to many different interpretations.
Very nice work.

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you friend!:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are very welcome.

[A. Amos]

After a long time I'm reading my favorite writer...this was deep and straight from your heart!
As always I truly enjoyed your work!

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much for such a kind review:)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I like this piece, your,a,very unique writer. :-)

Kaze~

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you do much Kaze:)

[Mary Ochoa]

..........*so

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)