Is this true?

Is this true?

A Poem by Mary Ochoa

So Tempting
So kind
I have never met anyone like him
Actually I began to believe that 
Finding romance and love in a man didn't exist
Always been told" Romance and love is only found in books"
Don't be dumb
I tell myself
Being loved and experiencing romance was always my dream
Holding hands
Gentle kisses
Fancy dinner dates
Movie nights at home
Talk and Talk until we fall into heaven
Always wore my heart on my sleeves
My problem
Many felt bad 
Poor girl
Stop reading those romantic novels
That's what they tell me
You're going to get hurt 
There's no hope 
Giving all romance and love
He showed up in my life
I have never met anyone like him before 

© 2014 Mary Ochoa


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This was a poetic story and I truly enjoyed, you have your way to capturing hearts of your reader...very well done:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

I really do hope to capture the hearts of my readers. Spreading the love;) Thank you Amos!:)
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're welcome you surely will:)


A poem, which tells a story with neat clarity, and circularity.




This is from my mind: it's not the poem, and its content that matters.....its your writing it that does.




There was a lovely sunset today, I didn't properly indulge it....I'm going to try to tomorrow though.


Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

Your reviews are always so different:) Always gets me thinking. Thank you friend! :)
The Representative

10 Years Ago


It's so welcoming, your saying that......it confirms to me that what I write is being receive.. read more

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Mary Ochoa
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