Is this true?

Is this true?

A Poem by Mary Ochoa

So Tempting
So kind
I have never met anyone like him
Actually I began to believe that 
Finding romance and love in a man didn't exist
Always been told" Romance and love is only found in books"
Don't be dumb
I tell myself
Being loved and experiencing romance was always my dream
Holding hands
Gentle kisses
Fancy dinner dates
Movie nights at home
Talk and Talk until we fall into heaven
Always wore my heart on my sleeves
My problem
Many felt bad 
Poor girl
Stop reading those romantic novels
That's what they tell me
You're going to get hurt 
There's no hope 
Giving all romance and love
He showed up in my life
I have never met anyone like him before 

© 2014 Mary Ochoa


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Aww, how happy to hear this xx
Stay blessed :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

Awww Thank you for reading my friend! :)
ahh, very nice, I love the romance idea, so true as well! romance, so evident and prospering within pages of a novel, yet in our daily lives there is always a hint of doubt.... what if we never find someone to love!? So cheers, to finding the right man!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

Yes your words are so true! Big Cheers to you my friend! Thank you so much for reading! :)
I don't think we should ever give up on finding that person that makes us complete.This is a very nice poem :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

I definitely agree friend! Keep the love alive! :D Thank you for reading!
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome Mary :)
Well the light has shined upon you :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

Thank you friend for reading!! lol :)
New Theory

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
This is a really nice piece.

Love is hard and its even harder to find. It may not be like all the romance novels but it is a beautiful thing with the right person.

Nice job girl!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

Thank you friend for reading! :) Experiencing love and romance with the right person is most girls d.. read more
Natalie Dieudonne

10 Years Ago

As do I :)
that's how my relationship is with my husband all my life I struggled to find the love of my life!!! nice job dear:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

Love and romance is so fragile and patient I learned. A struggle to find the love of your life is a .. read more
This is really good!

In my opinion, love is so hard to find.

It's almost extinct.

But you did so good. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jessica! I believe we women have to keep the romance alive as much as we can becau.. read more
Luna Zerimar

10 Years Ago

You're welcome. (:
It still exists like you say and not in just in books. Real and present. Excellent...:)................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

Yes I hope so! Thank you Sami! :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:)..................
I believe there is romance. A woman must demand and expect it. If a man won't treat you well when dating. He will be worst with a deeper relationship. No romance, you better escape. Good things take time. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mary Ochoa

10 Years Ago

You are completely right! :) Thank you friend for reading! I will keep in mind your review:) I appre.. read more

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