Do it all for you

Love or Stupid?

What do you want me to do?

Feed you

Cloth you

F**k you

Leave everyone behind

What do you want?

You know I'll do it

I want you happy

Want me to leave

Out of your sight

Forever

I'll pack my s**t

Leaving you nothing but my fire

No hate 

No tears 

Nothing

I'll just take that train to nowhere

Want that?

But one thing I will never do 

Not for you

Not for anyone

Is apologize for being me

For never wanting to change

Try to be her 

I just wanted you to be happy 

Even if I'm not part of your world

Author's Note

I really appreciate your reviews friends! :)

Reviews

[Bowers]

wow, creative and deeply expressive..
"I just wanted you to be happy
Even if I'm not part of your world"
i love these lines because I have been there--done that and its hard because I cannot change to be who he wants, and I won't try either, so great write, very relatable! :)

[Mary Ochoa]

Hurray for you my friend! No matter how much we must like or love the man, we should always be true to our soul by not being someone that doesn't make us happy to please the man. I that it just gives the man more control to hurt you. Thank you again for such a kind review and for reading my work! I truly appreciate it! :)

[New Theory]

Beautifully written, these words are expressing emotions awesomely.

[Mary Ochoa]

I'm glad you were pleased with this read friend! Thank you for reading! :)

[New Theory]

You are welcome :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

I loved the strength of the emotion in this piece.
"But one thing I will never do
Not for you
Not for anyone
Is apologize for being me."

I agree with this 100%
Awesome!

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much friend!! :) I appreciate your kind review!

[Natalie Dieudonne]

You're welcome sweetie :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Wow, this piece is really amazing, there's so much emotion in there.

Kaze~ :-)

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much Kaze! :) I was definitely pumped with many emotions when I wrote this poem:) Thank you!

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-) :-)

[Utkarsh Singh]

mary ......wow....!!!!!.....were you angry while writing this poem .......;) lol.....
i was reading your poem loud enough .......each and every word of your poem is filled with emotins .....good one .liked it very much ....:D

[Mary Ochoa]

Singh, Thank you so much for your energetic review! I really appreciate you reading:) Interesting that you asked if I was angry when I wrote this poem because I was actually not that angry like many would imagine based on this write lol Thank you again! ;)

[Utkarsh Singh]

you are welcome ........:D

[For Who I Am]

Wow! Each word describes an essence filled with a raging wife desperate for someone to be happy. Well Done!

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much for your review! :) A raging wife would be interesting :)

[Akansha]

wow it's so authentic and relatable....great job done!!!

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you Akansha for reading! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is filled with so much raw emotion.Your words screaming to be heard and they were.Great write Mary.

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much for your review friend!:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[The Representative]

I anticipated the context, as I proceeded to read. The moment "Is apologise for being me" came, I would've smiled to myself:


This is a prevalent theme in poetry and literature.......and it is of course, it's an absolute prevalent part of existence.






I'm of a minority, in that I try to appreciate each day, taking time to appreciate the sun.....unfortunately, such behaviour puts one at odds with "regular" society.




What you've written Mary is actually essential.

[Mary Ochoa]

Wow thank you friend for your review:) I'm hoping being essential is okay.

[The Representative]

The truth, that reality is repetition is what drives me to communicate the way I do; Mary, each opportunity I have to communicate to you is an opportunity to advance further along a ladder of capacity.


Between now and some future point, I'll have continued to have seen poems for me to read, and for me to offer thoughts on: the issue however that will get to me between now and such future point is the continued awareness of this truth - of the mere repetition of nature.


This is an important period of time for me; I'm now only just under a week away, from reaching the deadline for finding an agent for my text The Representative - the highest of all monumental
texts ever written.


Would you believe me Mary, after declaring that? That The Representative is the most monumental text ever written?


It's a text equally for every human being on the planet.


I'm happy Mary, that I do decide to make use my intelligence, offering you thoughts on your work - and I will continue to!


Have a nice evening.

[Mary Ochoa]

Wow that is really amazing Representative! I'm really happy for you for so much accomplishment you have achieved. I also really appreciate your reviews because you observe so well behind every piece. I definietly feel lucky to have met an intelligent writer like yourself. Thank you friend!
Have a nice day!

[A. Amos]

sorry one caring heart:) and I love reading your work