Sleep, Sleep

lights flashing

glasses empty

bottles full

Clear dance floor

Awake

People arrive

one by one

one drink by drink

one hello at a time

one partner at a time 

Pumped 

Grinding on that dance floor

glasses full

bottles empty

raining sweat

sweaters off

Hyped

Hotel room 

one couple 

starts slow 

every dropped layer is a shot of adrenaline

teases

peeks

seeks

hit the spot

sends them to

Sleep, Sleep

Author's Note

I appreciate you reviews! :)

Reviews

[Natalie Dieudonne]

This is a cool piece. It sounds like everything I would say after a crazy, fun party night.
Really fun piece Mary :)

[Mary Ochoa]

Awww Thank you so much Natalie! I'm glad you had a pleasant read!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing write, your very talented. :-)

Kaze~

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much Kaze for such a kind review! :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Moon]

Sounds like someone had a wild night, lol! Poem was nicely written and was enjoyable to read.

[Mary Ochoa]

lol Thank you friend for reading! :)

[Moon]

You are very welcome :)

[For Who I Am]

I agree! Great Job

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much friend! :)

[star73]

very expressive I love it sounds like a good time!

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you star!:)

[daemok]

I like how this poem tells a story. It's short and sweet, while being interesting and leaving the reader wondering what will happen in the morning lol. Coyote Ugly? Good job.

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you for reading daemok lol I'm pleased you found this reading interesting :) Coyote Ugly is a great movie! :)

[A. Amos]

Now this was a chill-out! i love the way you made portions of this piece with headings...i truly enjoyed the read as I was invited and part of your marvelous party:)

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much for reading and a kind review! :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend