On a mission

Another soul left 

For good maybe

What do I do?

What do I think?

How do I feel?

Does he think of me?

I put on my best shirt

Rockin best necklace

Wavy hair let loose

Put them sunglasses on

Walk straight

Wave

Smile

On a mission

A mission to the dark cave

Still feeling numb

Feeling no pulse through my veins

Sunlight no longer burns

Breeze no longer feels great

Don't let them see

Don't let them know

You're on a mission

Remember, aim to the dark cave

Author's Note

I really appreciate your reviews! :)

Reviews

[For Who I Am]

This has a turn of emotion which is great! Love this poem!

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you friend for reading! I appreciate your review:)

[-K]

Beautifully written. I love pieces that stir the emotions. Great piece.

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you for reading friend! I'm pleased to know that this piece stirs the emotions :) Thank you for your kind words:)

[Daydreamer]

Hello Mary,

I enjoyed this piece, it definitely made me feel something real... thank you :)

[Mary Ochoa]

I'm so pleased to know that you enjoyed this reading! :) Thank you for reading friend!:) I appreciate your review.

[The Representative]

What is it, right now I'm thinking?.... Your poem's content is mystifying.


Classy writing.

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you for reading friend! :)

[The Representative]

I try hard each time I review to communicate something different, and yet sincere.
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I try hard each time I review to communicate something different, and yet sincere.


I believe I managed that this time.


And thank you friend.

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you friend.
Will do :)

[star73]

very lovely thanks for sharing!

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you star:) I'm glad you enjoyed the read!

[Utkarsh Singh]

mary very beautiful poem ..........
"Still feeling numb
Feeling no pulse through my veins
Sunlight no longer burns
Breeze no longer feels great"
these line are so full of feeling ........i love them ...........

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much Singh! :) I really appreciate your review! :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

welcome .......and thank you ,,.............:D

[Vidya Bacchus]

This was written so well Mary.I really enjoyed it a lot.

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you Vidya for reading!:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome hunny :)

[A. Amos]

This was interesting and great write, you always write on various subjects and its shows; you truly are God gifted writer my friend. Simply epic!

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you Amos! I'm pleased to know that you enjoyed the read:)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear