One chance

Just need that one chance

A chance to make you mine

Only need one night

One night to remember for a lifetime

Just need 

You and I 

Give me that one chance

One layer at a time

No rush

No pressure

Unbutton

Unzip

All layers off

Release into me

Don't hold back

Want all of you

Right there 

That moment

No one else

You're the only one I want

Told you so many times

Yelling out your name

Top of my lungs 

Releasing 

Showing you my insecurities

Showing you my scars

Babe

Give me your power

Give me your steam

Give me all you got

Don't hold back

Every bang 

Only makes me stronger

Your bare skin

Feeling mine is what I want 

Is what I thrive for 

You're the only one I want 

Told you so many times 

Author's Note

I really appreciate your reviews! :)

Reviews

[The Representative]

Two words: energy and heart - that's what I can imagine it would've taken a lot of in you to have written that out.



It's not discovering the heart and the energy, that's hard; it's intellectually managing to maintain long enough, onto the such forces in the right sort of way that's hard.



I understand what you've wanted to do; it'll have likely been quite a bit harder than appears.



It's likeable Mary, what you've done.


Have a nice day.

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much for such a great review! I really appreciate it! :) As I continue to write, more of myself and words appears so much more clearly now. Have a nice day!

[The Representative]

Your welcome Mary.


My having chosen to review your poem was arbitrary, like all too much in life.


I'm glad if I made you happy.

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much! You did make me Happy! :)

[Sami Khalil]

"No rush
No pressure
Unbutton
Unzip
All layers off
Release into me
Don't hold back
Want all of you
Right there
That moment
No one else"

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much for reading Sami! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)..................

[New Theory]

Its a beautifully passionate song. Longing for someone. NIcely portrayed.

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you friend! :)

[New Theory]

You are welcome :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Really strong and passionate piece.

"Give me your power
Give me your steam
Give me all you got
Don't hold back
Every bang
Only makes me stronger."

I really loved this stanza.
Nice work!

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you Natalie! :) I'm pleased you had a good read:)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

You're welcome my dear :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so filled with passion and penned so well.Cool piece Mary :)

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much! :) I'm glad you found it pleasant to read!

[A. Amos]

Passionate write and love every word you write...

[Mary Ochoa]

Amos! Thank you so much! That truly means a lot to me! :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You know what you want and how to get it. Bravo.............

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed the read Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)............

[stars are far]

YES..that did hit the point..
well done ..

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much! I'm glad! :)

[daemok]

wow that's risque girl lol, this page is hot, hot, hot!

[Mary Ochoa]

lol Thank you daemok! I'm glad you think so! :)