SIlence is her love

The people she used to talk to ... all gone
She lives most of her day in silence
She became comfortable with silence
She got addicted to silence
no one exists anymore
puts her ear phones on, plays her music, and walks
She doesn't know where she's walking to
It all became a sick routine
life became a routine
She has no control
She's not the same girl three years ago
Did you say Bye?
She created a person who has yet to be discovered
Catch her if you can.

Author's Note

This is one of the Poems I have written. I am not very good but I still enjoy writing poems and short stories. I hope to get good feedback from reviewers as how to improve my writing. Thank you!

Reviews

[Shubhangi]

I can really relate myself to this poem of yours... silence is my friend too...very nicely written Mary...
thumbs up!!

[Mary Ochoa]

I am so pleased to know that you had a pleasant read! Thank you so much for a kind review friend! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I think you are good because this was very good.Keep writing :)

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much! I'm pleased you enjoyed the read :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I did and you are welcome :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

First off, I really liked this poem. I can relate to it because I was this girl.
Second, the best feedback I can give to you is to be confident in yourself and write from the heart. You can never go wrong with that.

Really nice work. Keep writing.

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much Natalie for a great review!! :) It truly means a lot to me!

[Natalie Dieudonne]

You're very welcome ;)

[Kaitlyn]

:)

I really enjoyed this, especially the last two lines.

Sort of sad, but very well done.

Keep up the good work!

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you friend Kaitlyn! :) I'm glad you enjoyed this reading :)

[A. Amos]

Love your style of writing brilliant and elegant. Thanks for sharing

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you! I'm glad you think so:)

[A. Amos]

You're welcome my dear

[Sami Khalil]

"She lives most of her day in silence
She became comfortable with silence
She got addicted to silence"

It is an indeed a refuge to so many souls. Excellent...:).................

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much! :D I hope to refuge many more souls through my poetry or to be specific with words:)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Good. Take care...:)....................

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you. You too! :)

[Sami Khalil]

:).........................

[Eddie Davis]

The first piece of advice I can give you is to just keep writing and enjoy it, and the rest will come to you as you grow in confidence.

[Mary Ochoa]

That is really great advice! Thank you sharing that with me. Through my writing and as a person I really do hope to grow in confidence. Thanks again! :)

[Quoting Ravens]

This shows much potential. Great job. Welcome to the Café, love!

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much Quoting Ravens! :D