Brushstroke

Brushstroke

A Poem by Omar
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Reminds me of Emily Dickinson's "A thought went up my mind to-day"

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You pulsated

In my reverie


Like a brushstroke

A heartbeat



A firefly 




And then you went away

© 2011 Omar


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This was very profound
I enjoyed it very much
Great work.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


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poignant
poetic
profound
leaves one in a void
i live in that absence
it mourns the one who's gone

Posted 13 Years Ago



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