Brushstroke
A Poem by Omar
Reminds me of Emily Dickinson's "A thought went up my mind to-day"
You pulsated
In my reverie
Like a brushstroke
A heartbeat
A firefly
And then you went away
© 2011 Omar
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This was very profound
I enjoyed it very much
Great work.
♥ Ta'Shandra
Posted 13 Years Ago
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poignant
poetic
profound
leaves one in a void
i live in that absence
it mourns the one who's gone
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Added on April 24, 2011
Last Updated on May 3, 2011
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OmarAmsterdam, Netherlands
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