Black Ashes

When black ashes

Of Heart

Settle

And then mix with

Salty drops

 

They turn into

Cement

Caking the entire

Nervous system

Filling the fragile cracks

And tearing the

Sensitive seams

With Sweet numbness

 

Reviews

[Loner]

Beautifully portrayed ..... a very heart felt poem with a thought provoking element
in it ......... awesome write !

[YourSecondShadow]

awesome. straight to the point and very thought provoking. koolio.

[Tai Chi Italy]

So true. Fantastic description of that choking feeling. The only solution that clears the channels is love, because sweet numbness, kills off everything after a while. Like anti bio tics.

Good to read you again

Smiling at you

Tai