Therapy

Therapy

A Poem by olympiuslu
"

"Death was waiting to caress my very thigh"

"

Every Monday I sit on your blood-stained chair

 and you move away the hair

that has covered my face.

The hair

that I cannot move

by myself anymore.

 

I told you

how I once met a man

who showed me that death was waiting

to caress my very thigh.


 Leaving me with bruises

Like some sort of ripe and juicy fruit

I taste so good

but you just spit me out.

 

You said you could help me

but you have taken advantage

of my mind

taking everything out

that made me who I am

and scattering it

all onto the floor. 

© 2018 olympiuslu


Author's Note

olympiuslu
I know I haven't posted in a while I have been so busy! However, I hope to get back to posting and reviewing regularly soon. For now, I wanted to post this poem that I finished a few months ago.

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We miss you when you're gone. Hope you can fit in some more writing soon! This is a top-notch poem. I love every word. It's so unexpected & a little bit shocking to open up with the blood on the therapist's chair . . . that one visual made me reel as I thought of how every person sits there & spills some blood . . . that is so brilliant & there are other similarly brilliant passages thru-out. Spitting out bruised fruit . . . that whole passage made me reel with memories of the ones who spit me out in real life . . . what a dynamic thought-provoking metaphor. Please read request me becuz I'm old & forgetful . . . I will forget to read you if you aren't here often. Love it when you drop in (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

olympiuslu

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for such kind words, I always look forward to your reviews as they are always so e.. read more



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Wow, I love this. This is so powerful and meaningful. Keep up these writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

olympiuslu

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
.....you have been missed during your hiatus, but this is a d@mn good poem to have come back with. Absolutely fantastic! Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

olympiuslu

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I am hoping to get back into writing and reviewing as much as possible.
emipoemi

6 Years Ago

looking forward.
We miss you when you're gone. Hope you can fit in some more writing soon! This is a top-notch poem. I love every word. It's so unexpected & a little bit shocking to open up with the blood on the therapist's chair . . . that one visual made me reel as I thought of how every person sits there & spills some blood . . . that is so brilliant & there are other similarly brilliant passages thru-out. Spitting out bruised fruit . . . that whole passage made me reel with memories of the ones who spit me out in real life . . . what a dynamic thought-provoking metaphor. Please read request me becuz I'm old & forgetful . . . I will forget to read you if you aren't here often. Love it when you drop in (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

olympiuslu

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for such kind words, I always look forward to your reviews as they are always so e.. read more

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Added on September 20, 2018
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