First Date

Block Poetry

I like it when you say my name. I like the way it slips off your tongue as you whisper it in the dark. I like the way your eyes look at me, lit up by the dashboard as you drive me home. I like the way your hands look on the steering wheel, firm and confident, rough and warm. I think I would like the way they would feel linked with mine.

"Let's do this again sometime," you say at my door.

"Ok," I whisper as I step inside.

Your smile follows me. And I like the way it looks.

Reviews

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This poem is sooo sweet! Thanks for sharing!

[Madison.]

Thank you!

[deleted]

You Are Welcome:)

[Stephen]

Ah! Poor-Lovers! What a mess they make! eh .. Lol "(Smiling)" Lovers are totally blind on love but what's love? Well, love's what which makes the heart close allowing the two souls to be one but is it really? O' yeah .. cos, it's a love which exactly means .. the hazel blue eyes attracts and the infatuations brings intimacy and then further the intimacy brings ..what? A love! Have ya ever noticed that at first love gives everything what we want but at an end it grabs everything what we got from love and what even we already have since we born?? I've noticed millions of time and am sure, you too'd have noticed if your heart bounced not once, twice or thrice but millions of times bringing some millions of dollars smiles on someone's face...isn't it? Anyway, whatever the love's .. people are mad at it ..so, may be, I'm .. lol How funny .. "(Laugh)"

I adore this poem not because you make me feel jealous going on a "FIRST DATE" with someone..lol but this piece's truly-appreciable cos it's came off right from your heart and here your love-birds feelings are captured into the words so, it's appreciable, no matter what. Ah! I hope the guy knows how lucky he's taking ya on a date. Ah! My bad! I missed the chance! S**t! "(Kidding)"

[Madison.]

Haha well, thank you! You have some very descriptive words that I enjoy. And thanks again, most of my stuffs just made up really haha.

[Stephen]

Aww.. your so sweet..thank god, this review'd have Disappeared Accidentally ..lol after all, I devote my time leaving some pretty cool words for ya .. so, how can it disappear? No way .. lol "(Smiling)" .. Yeah, much pleasure again, am honored to read your stuffs, hope to read some more coolio writes of yours in a mean while .. Ooh' really? So, what type of stuffs you MAKE UP?? ;)

[Madison.]

Haha well it was very thoughtful of you. Mm well just most of it really.

[Stephen]

Lol .. Thanks .. am glad you got my skilly not willy-nilly knacks ;) If most of the stuffs are on DATE then i'd love to read them later on cus .. even who'd love to get jealous seeing you into the someone's arms ..on a date again n again? eh .. (Kidding) ;)

[Madison.]

Haha oh nice try, thanks