Tired Lungs.

tired girl with a tired mind

always looking close behind.

A quickened breath

In a shallow chest

Stay awake,

Don't be late.

Don't let them see you breathe.

Reviews

[Acer]

You've written so well, i loved few lines,
A quickened breath
In a shallow chest
Stay awake,
Don't be late...
so, pretty stanza, loved to read it out indeed.

[Madison.]

Thank you very much, I appreciate this.

[Acer]

My pleasure :-')

[Rossen]

thumb's up!

[Madison.]

Thanks!