Not Too Terrible

Not Too Terrible

A Poem by Olmsted A. T.

Not Too Terrible


 

Walking - people walking

Extras in the center of the street

 

Traffic

keeps on running

don't lose your step

it wont be neat

 

It seems to me

this dead end town

Goes on an on till nevermore

 

(Nevermore)

 

Its a reference to literature

it should be kinda obvious

you have heard the line before

the times you spent

wasting your brain

 

When all you could think of

while you were walking down the

halls was how many games

will i have to deal with today

 

The scene's not changed

the players have done thier monologues

and the setting has never

earned that much respect


The direction i must say

has been executed moderately just

under above piss poor

 

script wasnt bad

twist unexpected

but financing would be a problem

the project couldn't overthrow

 

The editor has lost his way

the soundtrack sounds just the same

as the one you heard a week before

 

And the premise 

hah the premise

 

Will never ever

never ever never change

© 2017 Olmsted A. T.


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Added on May 4, 2017
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Olmsted A. T.
Olmsted A. T.

Bradenton, FL



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