My immortal

So many songs inspired me to look deep inside...

 

 

Rose on the floor, spattered with wine.

In this dark room, where I stand,

From above, it looks like blood of mine.

I lean down, and take it with my hand.

Here, where I stand…

 

I slowly rip petal by petal,

Watching them fall from above,

And how one by one turns to feather,

Having the shining of an angel love.

Watching, from above…

 

Then I felt something inside of me,

Growing so fast, trying to get out!

It covered my skin, making me see,

How I became free, without a single shout.

Free, while getting out…

 

I wanted to speak, but I’ve heard a roar.

And my hands, they were covered with black lines.

I felt no fear…Not anymore.

I felt a power that my mind and heart combines!

Power, with those black lines…

 

Oh, the weakness…No! Where the power go?! 

So sudden I was on my knees,

On the ground, in the wine, I felt so low.

I thought nothing could my pain ease!

Nothing, while on my knees…

 

I closed my eyes, with hands in my hair,

When I heard music going through my head.

“Soldier of fortune”, I heard: “Beware”.

And everything around me turned to red.

I heard it, in my head…

 

“Like a sound of a windmill going round”

I knew that melody, it opened my eyes.

It helped me found my new bound.

I felt again I should try to reach the skies.

I knew, it opened my eyes…

 

I was on my feet again, standing in the room,

There was no dark anymore.

The melody in my head made me assume:

We are all both poor and the mighty roar.

Yes, no dark anymore…

 

This path of life is good, tho’ it has so many door…

Author's Note

Look at the photo i uploaded... it is the "drawn" version of my immortal

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

You have some very creative and inspirational lines. Thanks for entering my contest and the best of luck.

[Anima Inspired]

The power in these lines is immense...the story is quite wonderful in poetic form. Many people have written things about thier "immortal", but you have taken this to a level that exceeds most of what I have seen written thus far. Quite breathtaking, truly...