numb

numb

A Poem by olivia

Feeling so numb

Just want to go

Just want to feel

Something

Pain sucks but at least

Its some thing

What do I do when I love you

And I know more than you think

When I cant breath without you

When I actually miss us fighting

When I wish we could be fighting instead of this nothing

This nothing between us and I feel inside

I though without you id be fine but all I am is nothing

What's happened?

What's happing?

Why you talk to them but ignore me ?

Do you not get I cant cope?

Do you not no I care?

© 2014 olivia


Author's Note

olivia
ignore all problems

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It's hard to ignore the mistakes in such a small piece. I would gently advise you to check all spelling and punctuation before you publish.
I do like this poem BUT if you already KNOW that it has flaws, Why did you publish.?
A good poem, a little dissapointed.


Posted 10 Years Ago


I have read this poem. Ya, I could understand your feeling. This poem has really touched me. Thank you.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on June 25, 2014
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olivia
olivia

United Kingdom



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