always the same

always the same

A Poem by olivia
"

this poems about a part of my life that i share with one other

"
here we go once again
are you my lover or my friend
round and round 
we always go
head in sky
heart in hand
love on mind 
rain falls deeper
clouds get darker
heart sinks lower
but round and round
we continue to go...

© 2014 olivia


Author's Note

olivia
ignore any mistakes grammar or spelling

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I've read this again. I would like to recommend it BUT it needs editing. It deserves more reviews.
Where are the capitals and punctuations ?
This is a powerful piece of writing.
Very well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the staccato fashion of this little poem.
Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on June 1, 2014
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olivia
olivia

United Kingdom



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