Stray

Stray

A Poem by The Fallen

Following the path you choose

Is always so hard to do

When others try to choose for you

Now is the time to decide will you stay

Or will you stray

 

You always wanted to stay

Somewhere you belonged

You live with no regrets

Cause you got nothing to loose

 

So you stray

Convincing yourself it will all be okay

 

In the cold breeze you walk alone,

Crying the pain of sorrow

You stand on the edge

Staring up at where the moon should be

 

You have strayed

From the path others have chosen

You will stray

Until you fall

© 2013 The Fallen


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It is alright to stray. Better to walk alone than follow the cattle to the slaughter house. The poem open the door to many questions. I rather walk the good road than be a follower of fool's. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Fallen

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading



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I love this, Fallen! I really liked how you changed the way the text looked when you said "stray". It really makes it pop and gives it more meaning to me. This was beautifully written and has so much truth within it. Loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Fallen

11 Years Ago

Thanks! This poem meant alot to me as well :3 I am glad you enjoyed it.
Savior of Time

11 Years Ago

You're welcome :3
Wow, this poem was amazing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Fallen

11 Years Ago

Thank you :D
This is so true, and briliantly writen. Sometimes the path that others may choose for us, may not be the path that we choose for ourselves.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Fallen

11 Years Ago

Thank you :3

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