Stray

Following the path you choose

Is always so hard to do

When others try to choose for you

Now is the time to decide will you stay

Or will you stray

 

You always wanted to stay

Somewhere you belonged

You live with no regrets

Cause you got nothing to loose

 

So you stray

Convincing yourself it will all be okay

 

In the cold breeze you walk alone,

Crying the pain of sorrow

You stand on the edge

Staring up at where the moon should be

 

You have strayed

From the path others have chosen

You will stray

Until you fall

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

It is alright to stray. Better to walk alone than follow the cattle to the slaughter house. The poem open the door to many questions. I rather walk the good road than be a follower of fool's. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[The Fallen]

Thank you for reading

[Blissful Sin]

Loved this! You have a great writing style! Keep on doing what you love!

-Bliss

[The Fallen]

Thank you for reading

[Michael Soul]

parts of my mind
drip from the selling
pouring down the walls.
as multiple colored rain drops,
lyrical vapor roller coaster
fluids out through the flour,
given for tomorrow.
through waves of history
flows within wires and air waves
form past yesterday's
relaying parts of my mind
re shaping refreshing reforming,
linked in nature and bounded with creation.

[PurpleQuartz]

Loved this! I read it twice because it was so good.

[The Fallen]

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it

[Red & Blue]

After skimming over your works, I will admit that the tittle jumped out at me, and wow, it defiantly was not a let down. I could feel a touch of hope in there. Wonderful writing

[The Fallen]

Thank you for reading I am glad you enjoyed it

[Rose Kavanagh]

Great work, this piece almost seems like it should be read in a whisper. Lovely!

[The Fallen]

Thank you so much :3

[Wolfwind]

This was really awesome! It reminded me of the voice of the stars speaking down to a cat as it walks along a fence away from the home where it's siblings and it were raised. A nice piece of ink with good flow, a catchy repetition and a unique feel.

Great Ink!
Aaron

[The Fallen]

Thank you for reading! :D

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

very well written, i love the story line to it.

[SyberRose]

Nicely done...SyberRose

[Akira]

Love, love, love!!

[The Fallen]

thanks! :D

[Akira]

You are so welcome :)

[Felicity's Eve]

I love how you repeat 'stray'! It gives this marvelous poem so much intensity :)

Awesome :3

100/100