The fire within me.

The fire within me, keeps me going

 

I watch the fire's dance

It slowly places me in a trance

 

Firey love is lost in lust.

Without it I would slowly distrust.

 

There's fire in my heart

racing, through anything that dares cross it's path

A light glow lives inside me

It is radiant.

 

The fire within me

Sets a spark in my eye

The fire within me

Burns like a thousand suns

 

The fire within me, keeps me going

 

 

Reviews

[Nyu]

this is so enthusiastic and brightly shown x) i can see it in my head, this radiant person so powerful and strong.

[soulesswriter]

i like it and i take it that fire is basivlly ur motivation or drive that keeps u going right? f im right it sound like ur happy and u expressed it in da best way possible.:) correct me if im wrong but i think thT firey love and lust means that ur motivation is through love and passion which is cool.welll writen . like the line "racing, through anything that dares cross it's path"

[Kt k]

The fiery love is lost in lust reminds me of romeo and juilet and how there whee in lust with one another this seems to be happening more and more people care more about a persons looks then the fire inside the person they would wrather date someone who looks really good and has black smoke inside of them then date a uglyer person with a warming fire inside of them you have amazing talent by the way excellent piece

[Tennessee]

"The fire within me keeps me going" is my favorite line. Good job kid.

[Red & Blue]

A strong and moving write. The fire inside oneself can truly be what keeps us going. I apllaud you, you have great talent

[The Fallen]

Thank you!!:)

[Rhianne Ney]

The fire within me, keeps me going. That's one great line and something that was describing your inner strengths (:

[The Fallen]

Yeah.
Thanks for reading

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome (:

[Horizon K.]

The feeling of burning inside, with love, passion, is amazing. Great capture of that!

[The Fallen]

Thank you :)

[Bella Luna]

This is so powerful! Great job!

[The Fallen]

Thank you :)