A Mime

There is a friend of mine

Who thinks that she is a mime

She will walk around like she is in a box

Wearing pink and purple socks

She is an odd sort of friend

True and silent to the end

You can tell her a secret

And she will never repeat it

For who has the time

To stand and watch the story of a mime

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This was great! I loved the last two lines. They put a cool twist on this, that brought the hole poem into the range of Awesome!

Two suggestions; You may want to use contractions, it will shorten some of the lines and stream line the flow.
And secondly you have some filler words that you could leave out if you wanted to. For example in line 2
"Who thinks that she is a mime" could be "Who thinks she's a mime"
Just a possibility.
I love the images of your works that i've read thus far.
Keep up the good work

Sincerly,
Ashley :)